Writing effective letters of introduction

I’m a big fan of reaching out to potential clients directly to let them know you exist. The letter of introduction (LOI) is a time-tested way to market, and as a freelance editor, I’ve used it successfully to sell my services to book publishers and packagers. I don’t use LOIs to target indie authors as this seems like it would be a lot more work than it’s worth.

But to solicit freelance work from a company that might be worth tens of thousands of dollars to me over the course of a client relationship? Yes, that’s a worthwhile investment of my time and energy.

An LOI should create a point of connection between you and the potential client, something that says you understand the client’s situation and needs. Ideally these points of connection are customized to the particular person you’re reaching out to:

  • “I just finished reading TITLE, which I know you edited. I loved that book! And I would love to be part of making books like that.”
  • “I saw your call on LinkedIn for a freelance proofreader and wanted to introduce myself.”
  • “I saw your tweet about Stephen King’s new novel and I have to say I’m a huge fan of his, too. As a freelance developmental editor specializing in horror . . . .”

None of this is rocket science and it doesn’t have to take that long. It’s not hard to say something specific and positive such as:

  • “I’ve always enjoyed reading the books PUBLISHER publishes. Some of my favorites are TITLE AND TITLE.”

But if you don’t have time to track down a point of connection or can’t quickly find one, then it’s okay to just state your business:

  • “I’m writing because I’m a freelance developmental editor who . . . .”

But DO NOT do what a recent marketer did to me:

  • “Hi Jennifer! I’m reaching out because I noticed we both follow the same personal finance advisors on Twitter.”

No, you didn’t. I don’t follow financial advisors on Twitter. I follow book people. So what you’re doing is lying to me.

That is not a good look.

If you can’t take a few minutes to customize your LOI, then don’t try to customize it. And for all that’s good in the world, don’t try to start a business relationship with a lie.

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